Comments for Onions to Bunions http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com Writing interests ranging from technical to health & nutrition Thu, 17 Sep 2009 17:26:40 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Sexed Up Education? by Vandana http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/sex-education-in-india-the-times-of-india/#comment-220 Vandana Thu, 17 Sep 2009 17:26:40 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/sex-education-in-india-the-times-of-india/#comment-220 Great blog! We are waiting to see you do more! Great blog! We are waiting to see you do more!

]]> Comment on Will I post more? by Rimi B. Chatterjee http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2008/08/28/will-i-post-more/#comment-215 Rimi B. Chatterjee Sun, 23 Nov 2008 18:47:31 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-215 Hi there. How goes it? Esp. with the book? Hi there. How goes it? Esp. with the book?

]]> Comment on Do women belong in the army? by NewWrldYankee http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/23/do-women-belong-in-the-army/#comment-214 NewWrldYankee Thu, 28 Aug 2008 15:50:02 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/23/do-women-belong-in-the-army/#comment-214 I remember this article! Are you posting again soon, anytime? I remember this article! Are you posting again soon, anytime?

]]> Comment on Contact by rasanaatreya http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/contact/#comment-213 rasanaatreya Wed, 18 Jun 2008 04:10:40 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/contact/#comment-213 Hi Carmel, Please, please, please do not give up on writing. I do see a lot of potential in you. I see you've written non-fiction before. However, fiction is a whole new ballgame. My strong recommendation is that you set this book aside for a while, leave this group and join the Practice-W group of IWW. They give you a theme every week. You're supposed to come up with a 400-piece word piece based on that theme. There are a lot of people who critique, and give great advice. Stay on that list and learn from it. And the key to handling crits is to not take it personally, work on your weak points (even seasoned writers have them) and improve your writing. I'm positive you'll go far. Though I myself edit technical books, I'm terrible at fiction (though I'm working on it). Once you get the hang of writing fiction (and it is a learned art, believe me), you'll be able to work on your book. You might want to get a copy of: Self-Editing for Fiction writers. Browne & King. I highly recommend it. Good luck! Rasana Hi Carmel,

Please, please, please do not give up on writing. I do see a lot of potential in you. I see you’ve
written non-fiction before. However, fiction is a whole new ballgame. My strong recommendation is that

you set this book aside for a while, leave this group and join the Practice-W group of IWW. They give you
a theme every week. You’re supposed to come up with a 400-piece word piece based on that theme. There
are a lot of people who critique, and give great advice. Stay on that list and learn from it. And the

key to handling crits is to not take it personally, work on your weak points (even seasoned writers
have them) and improve your writing. I’m positive you’ll go far.

Though I myself edit technical books, I’m terrible at fiction (though I’m working on it).

Once you get the hang of writing fiction (and it is a learned art, believe me), you’ll be able to
work on your book.

You might want to get a copy of: Self-Editing for Fiction writers. Browne & King. I highly recommend it.

Good luck!
Rasana

]]> Comment on Contact by Carmel Fitzgerald http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/contact/#comment-212 Carmel Fitzgerald Wed, 18 Jun 2008 02:01:48 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/contact/#comment-212 Dear Rasana I am new at fiction writing. I have always been interested in non fiction - love the research that goes with that. I really appreciate your comments about Hidden Valley and take them all on board. I have received so many negative comments that I thought I would give it all away and go back to my family history, but you have given me new hope. You are the first on the novels list who said you actually enjoyed reading it I would like to send you more for comment, off the list. I make this suggestion because your bio on this page says you do book editing. I am not sure how book editing works. Please let me know if I am out of line. Carmel Dear Rasana
I am new at fiction writing. I have always been interested in non fiction – love the research that goes with that.
I really appreciate your comments about Hidden Valley and take them all on board. I have received so many negative comments that I thought I would give it all away and go back to my family history, but you have given me new hope. You are the first on the novels list who said you actually enjoyed reading it
I would like to send you more for comment, off the list. I make this suggestion because your bio on this page says you do book editing. I am not sure how book editing works.
Please let me know if I am out of line.
Carmel

]]> Comment on Films Killing Theatre? by Nitesh http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/15/marathi-theatre/#comment-211 Nitesh Tue, 29 Apr 2008 09:43:47 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/15/marathi-theatre/#comment-211 The Same articles which was on another blog, whatever i wanna say that I dont think that films are killing theatre, bec films have diff kinds of ways to promote films throgh tv comm, radio, web. I am promoting Marathi Plays and Marathi Theatre through the website www.marathitheatre.com The Same articles which was on another blog, whatever i wanna say that I dont think that films are killing theatre, bec films have diff kinds of ways to promote films throgh tv comm, radio, web. I am promoting Marathi Plays and Marathi Theatre through the website http://www.marathitheatre.com

]]> Comment on My doctor got a “C” grade by celpjefscycle http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/incompetent-doctors-the-hindu/#comment-209 celpjefscycle Sat, 12 Jan 2008 08:30:51 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/incompetent-doctors-the-hindu/#comment-209 Thanks for information. many interesting things Celpjefscylc Thanks for information.
many interesting things
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]]> Comment on My doctor got a “C” grade by abishek44 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/incompetent-doctors-the-hindu/#comment-94 abishek44 Wed, 08 Aug 2007 08:03:11 +0000 http://onions2bunions.wordpress.com/2007/06/14/incompetent-doctors-the-hindu/#comment-94 ya , the system is bad, doctors do npt entertain patient's questions and get angry , i think pharmacist culture should br there in INDIA at par that's now in U.S., then only the system may improve.. ya , the system is bad, doctors do npt entertain patient’s questions and get angry , i think pharmacist culture should br there in INDIA at par that’s now in U.S., then only the system may improve..

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